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1. Approaching the source of the Nile

2. Source of the Nile

3. Another discovery of the source of the Nile

4. Nile twisting and turning

5. Abyssinia

6. Abola

7. Astaboras River

8. Floating hair

9. Prophecies of war

 

James Bruce

2. Source of the Nile

Now Bruce gets mad.

No more stalling, he tells his guide. He wants to see the headwaters of the Nile.

He takes off his shoes, and plunges down the green hill through thick flowers, then through a marsh to an island, with an island, shaped like an altar, in the middle of which rises a fountain, giving life to the Nile.

Here is the answer to more than a thousand years of questions; the goal of countless explorers; the mystery behind the ancient holy river. The moment is dramatic enough to stick in anyone's memory, so I find it believable that Coleridge might recall the details when envisioning a wilderness plot, green and fountainous.

But Lowes suggests that the description might also link, in Coleridge's memory, with passages in Bartram, tramping through Florida. Bruce's "hillock of green sod" might chime with Bartram's "swelling green knoll" by the "inchanting fountain." Bruce's hillside "thick grown over with flowers" might echo the flowers in Bartram; the water being "forced itself out with great violence" resembles the Manatee Spring in Bartram, with water bubbling up, intermittently, then settling down.

Lowes imagines that these visual memories link together, and he calls them the "hooks and eyes of the memory." He concludes:

The vivid images of fountains in Florida and Abyssinia, with their powerful ejected streams, have coalesced in the deep Well and risen up together, at once both and neither, in the dream.

So for Lowes, the sacred river flows from Ethiopia, Kashmir, and Florida.

Other sources

William Bartram
William Beckford
F. Bernier
Thomas Burnet
William Collins
Herodotus
Athanasius Kircher
Jerome Lobo
Thomas Maurice
John Milton
Pausanias
Samuel Purchas
Major James Rennell
Seneca
Strabo
Virgil

Mary Wollstonecraft

 

Text

Come, come, said I…no more words; it is now late, lose no more time, but carry me to Gesh, and the head of the Nile directly, without preamble, and shew me the hill that separates me from it. He then carried me round to the south side of the church, out of the grove of trees that surrounded it. "This is the hill, says he, looking archly, that…was between you and the fountains of the Nile; there is no other; look at that hillock of green sod in the middle of that watery spot, it is in that the two fountains of the Nile are to be found: Gesh is on the face of the rock where yon green trees are: if you go the length of the fountains pull off your shoes…for these people are all Pagans…and they believe in nothing that you believe, but only in this river, to which they pray every day as if it were God." ….

Half undressed as I was by loss of my sash, and throwing my shoes off, I ran down the hill towards the little island of green sods; …the whole side of the hill was thick grown over with flowers, the large bulbous roots of which appearing above the surface of the ground, and their skins coming off on treading upon them, occasioned two very severe falls before I reached the brink of the marsh; I after this came to the island of green turf, which was in form of an altar, apparently the work of art, and I stood in rapture over the principal fountain which rises in the middle of it.

It is easier to guess than to describe the situation of my mind at that moment--standing in that spot which had baffled the genius, industry, and inquiry of both ancients and moderns, for the course of near three thousand years. --Bruce III 596-7

 
Word Line # Line Sources for word
Amid 20 Amid whose swift half-intermitted burst  Bernier 1
 Bernier 3
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2
 Herodotus
 Milton 4
 Purchas 1
 Purchas 2
 Wollstonecraft
Ancient 10 And here were forests ancient as the hills  Bernier 2
 Bruce 2
 Burnet 1
 
Pausanias
Fountain

19

A mighty fountain momently was forced

 Bartram 4
 Bartram 5
 Bartram 6

 Bartram 7

 Bartram 8
 Beckford
 Bernier 2
 Bernier 4
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2

 Bruce 3

 Burnet 1
 Herodotus
 Maurice 2
 Milton 4
 Pausanias
 Rennell
 Seneca 1
 Virgil
 Wollstonecraft

 

34

From the fountain and the caves

 Bartram 4
 Bartram 5
 Bartram 6

 Bartram 7

 Bartram 8
 Beckford
 Bernier 2
 Bernier 4
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2

 Bruce 3

 Burnet 1
 Herodotus
 Maurice 2
 Milton 4
 Pausanias
 Rennell
 Seneca 1
 Virgil
 Wollstonecraft

Green

13

Down the green hill athwart a cedarn cover

 Bartram 1
 Bartram 3
 Bartram 4
 Bernier 1
 Bruce 2
 Milton 1

Greenery

11

Enfolding sunny spots of greenery

 Bartram 1
 Bartram 3
 Bartram 4
 Bernier 1
 Bruce 2
 Milton 1

Ground

6

So twice five miles of fertile ground

 Bartram 3
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2

 Burnet 1

 Milton 4
 Purchas 1

Hill

13

Down the green hill athwart a cedarn cover

 Beckford
 Bernier 1
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2
 Bruce 7

 Bruce 9

 Milton 3
 Milton 4

 Purchas 5

Hills

10

And here were forests ancient as the hills

 Bernier 1
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2
 Bruce 7

 Bruce 9

 Milton 3
 Milton 4

 Purchas 5

Holy

14

A savage place! As holy and enchanted

 Bartram 2
 Bruce 2
 Bruce 9
 Collins
 Purchas 2
 Rennell

 

52

And close your eyes with holy dread,

 Bartram 2
 Bruce 2
 Bruce 9
 Collins
 Purchas 2
 
Rennell

Mid 23    Bernier 1
 Bernier 3
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2
 Herodotus
 Milton 4
 Purchas 1
 Purchas 2
 Wollstonecraft
  29   Bernier 1
Bernier 3
Bruce 1
Bruce 2
Herodotus
Milton 4
Purchas 1
Purchas 2
Wollstonecraft
Midway 32 Floated midway on the waves Bernier 1
Bernier 3
Bruce 1
Bruce 2
Herodotus
Milton 4
Purchas 1
Purchas 2
Wollstonecraft
Momently

24

It flung up momently the sacred river

Bartram 7
Bruce 2
Ran 3 Where Alph, the sacred river, ran Bernier 5
Bruce 2
Purchas 4
Ran 26 Through wood and dale the sacred river ran Bernier 5
Bruce 2
Purchas 4
River

3

Where Alph, the sacred river, ran

 Bartram 3
 Bartram 6
 Beckford
 Bernier 1
 Bernier 2
 Bernier 3
 Bernier 5
 
Bruce 2
 Bruce 4
 Bruce 6

 Burnet 1
 Kircher 1
 Kircher 3
 Maurice 1
 Milton 4
 Pausanias
 Rennell
 Seneca 1
 Strabo 1
 Strabo 2

 Virgil

 

24

It flung up momently the sacred river

 Bartram 3
 Bartram 6
 Beckford
 Bernier 1
 Bernier 2
 Bernier 3
 Bernier 5

 Bruce 2

 Bruce 4
 Bruce 6

 Burnet 1
 Kircher 1
 Kircher 3
 Maurice 1
 Milton 4
 Pausanias
 Rennell
 Seneca 1
 Strabo 1
 Strabo 2

 Virgil

 

26

Through wood and dale the sacred river ran

 Bartram 3
 Bartram 6
 Beckford
 Bernier 1
 Bernier 2
 Bernier 3
 Bernier 5

 Bruce 2

 Bruce 4
 Bruce 6

 
Burnet 1
 
Kircher 1
 Kircher 3
 Maurice 1
 Milton 4
 Pausanias
 Rennell
 Seneca 1
 Strabo 1
 Strabo 2

 Virgil

Rock

23

And ‘mid these dancing rocks at once and ever

 Bartram 5
 Bartram 6
 Bartram 7
 Bartram 8
 Bruce 2

 Bruce 7

 Collins
 Milton 6
 Wollstonecraft
 

Spots 11 Enfolding sunny spots of greenery  Bartram 2
 Bruce 2
Thick 18 As if this earth in fast thick pants were breathing  Bartram 3
 Bruce 1
 Bruce 2
 Milton 3
Tree

9

Where blossomed many an incense-bearing tree

 Bartram 3
 Beckford
 Bernier 2
 Bruce 2
 Bruce 8
 Milton 2
 Milton 4
 Purchas 3

 

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